More from Longbeach….

1. So you thought writing on a movie set would be glamorous, eh? When I got bored, I did some work on Stormseeker.

2. When a hotel room was being booked for my daughter, she was asked if she’d like the Queen Mary. Now, she’s the kind of person who get’s seasick jumping a puddle, so she said no.
Sigh.
3. So instead we stayed in the Renaissance – this was the view from our window.
4. I eventually found my way to the beach. I’ve decided that one reason I am not enamoured by L.A. beaches, is that the sand is such a yucky colour. Sort of nondescript brown. Give me those brilliant white sands of West Australian beaches any day…

LONG BEACH, CA.

I am actually staying in a hotel in Long Beach at the moment, as my daughter is working on location here (film work, production side, not acting!).

I spent a bit of time today on the set in an old warehouse down on the waterfront (an episode of CSI and Prison Break were filmed here), which was very interesting, for me at least, and confirmed my previous impression of film work – gleaned from when she was a kid acting in some TV adverts years ago: you would have to be insane to think that acting is glamorous. It is repetitive and boring for the most part, and I take my hat off to actors who can produce great work in short takes done for the umpteenth time.
The other thing that impresses an outsider is how many people and how much time and equipment goes into producing each of minute of film…
I can’t say anything about what the production is, so don’t ask. All hush-hush at the moment.

Title troubles settled

As some of you may remember, the titles for the three books of my present trilogy presented me with a problem. I can write a 180,000 word book, but I can’t come up with a three word title. Or more or less words than three. At least, not without help.

So with the help of an agent and two editors (they all rock) from two different countries, it seems we have finally found something that all of us like. And glory be, they are not as yet used by half a dozen genre writers and film-makers, although there is a spy thriller with a name that comes close to the final book title.

So here is the unveiling…

Trilogy name: RANDOM RAIN

Book One: STORMQUEST
Book Two: STORMSEEKER
Book Three: STORMBREAK

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Reading and travel

Started the day at 4.50 a.m. to get to Charlottesville airport. I am now in L.A.
Did quite a bit of writing until laptop battery ran out. Then read a good book “Rules of Ascension” by David B. Coe. Plane arrived half an hour early.

I finished both “The God Delusion” and “A Year of Living Biblically” while in Virginia, and I recommend those for any God-fearing person who would like to have their faith tested. I would dearly have loved to recommend them to the pleasant young man sitting next to me on the plane, who was far to polite to say anything about the nosy woman sitting next to him reading over his shoulder. He started off by reading “The Shack”*, then turned to a manual which had one section headlined “Homework: Maintaining a Biblical Marriage” and numerous other equally interesting exercises. Then he ended his reading with a book titled “Christian Trivia.”

Daughter No.2 met me and we had lunch in a shack – a Thai restaurant by the sea in Malibu. Now settled into Echo Park…

*which has an extraordinary 1,300 reviews on Amazon and an editorial blurb starts by saying: “Mac is a grief-stricken father in mid-life about to have an extraordinary experience with God. His great sadness began four years ago on a weekend camping trip, when his 6-year-old daughter, Missy, was murdered. What he couldn’t know then, but is about to learn, was God’s purpose for Missy’s death.” (Sounds really sick to me and an instant turn off.)

Synopses

Last Friday some of us posted a query letter that was successful. Tomorrow, others are posting a successful synopses. I am not involved because I was reluctant to post a synopsis – I think they give away far too much about a book, and I don’t want my readers to know what is going to happen!

I did post the beginnings of the synopsis of Random Rain here back in July, if anyone missed it and is interested.

Anyway, if you want to see what a stack of other writers say about synopses with examples, look here tomorrow for a list of URLs.

Tomorrow, I set off for Los Angeles. So, soon some bogging from the west coast.

Preeta Samarasan

Preeta Samarasan, author of Evening is the Whole Day is a “new” Malaysian author who is deservedly going places. She was interviewed by MPH’s Quill magazine, and the wonderful Sharon Bakar at Bibliobibuli has posted the interview in two parts: Part one and part two, an interview absolutely worth reading, and not just by Malaysians.

Preeta has some exceptionally wise things to say about writing and the Malaysian scene, for a start. I look forward to meeting her in person one day.

As an individual I related to the question on whether it is necessary to leave the country to become a Malaysian novelist of note.

Preeta replies, ‘I think writers are people who identify as outsiders whether or not they have the opportunity to leave physically. Frequently, they identify as outsiders from childhood…’ which I think applies to me, a feeling that was exacerbated by my living almost my whole life in places that did not remotely resemble the place where I grew up.

She adds, and this is something I have been saying for ages and is the main reason I opted out of mainstream literature into genre: ‘But one thing would probably been different (if she hadn’t left Malaysia) : I don’t think I would’ve been brave enough to say these things as loudly as I’m saying them now. Like most Malaysians, I had lots of unexamined fears when I lived in the country. Fears of the government, fears of What People Will Think — between those two, it’s hard to say which is the greater set of fears! I think of my expatriate status as a luxury that allows me to say what I want without these fears.

I can remember the moment when I learned the power of What People Will Think in the Malaysian context. It was shortly after I arrived in Malaysia in the early 70s. My husband was abroad, so a friend invited me to stay for a week or two in her remote Kelantanese kampung up near Jelawat. (The hospitality of these people – none of whom had much money – was extraordinary; I have rarely felt as welcomed by strangers as I was in that village.)

Anyway, to get to my point: the houses there used cheap cotton prints for curtains – the kind of material that only has a pattern on one side. They hung these curtains with the pattern facing outwards. It was more important that the house look good from the outside, than that it looked good for you, the owner, living on the inside.

To live in Malaysia and to write an honest book about Malaysia and Malaysians takes enormous courage.

Careful of that sword, aka please don’t sue me…

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This clause is in my new book contract:
“The Works shall not contain any recipe, formula, suggestion or advice which if followed has the potential to cause harm…”

Oh dear. I immediately cut out the “charm of powerful trouble recipe”, you know, the one on page 234, the bit about boiling and baking the “Eye of newt and toe of frog, Wool of bat, and tongue of dog, Adder’s fork and blind-worm’s sting, Lizard’s leg and howlet’s wing…” After all, even if readers aren’t crazy enough to drink it, we all know how badly things went wrong when someone dabbled with that mixture, right? And nowadays we have to worry about bird flu, SARS, salmonella and rabies as well. OK, toss that bit.

But what on earth am I going to do with that description of teaching the lad how to fight with a sword on p.93? Or the battle description on p.450. Loads of advice with the potential to cause harm there. You know, stuff along the lines of: “Lop off the dastardly knave’s head, you fool!”

I do so love lawyer lingo.


Ok, folks, newsflash

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The Random Rain trilogy is going to be published by HarperCollins Voyager Australia.

Book One will be out in September 2009, a year from now, if all is well, with the other two books to follow in 2010, just 6 months apart.

Yay!

P.S. So, Joanna, you will get your free book! 🙂

Disguise

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Take a look at the plant below – looks like it has some sort of pine cone type thingies on it.

But nope, they are the protective cases of some kind of caterpillar. At a wild and uneducated guess, a moth – not sure why I think that. It could just as easily be a butterfly. Pix taken up at the apple farm, showing one of the guys poking his head out of the attached end.
The bush was covered in these things.
And how is the writing progressing? Nearly 60% of the final total on the writeropia picometer.

As my word aim for the first draft is about 170,000, the percentage for that is even better:


Or am I trying to disguise the fact that I am not writing as much as I should – and average of 600 words a day in the past 8 days? Aargh. Gotta do better than that.