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		By: Anonymous		</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 24 Nov 2014 13:22:26 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Grapes of Wrath?
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Grapes of Wrath?</p>
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		By: Anonymous		</title>
		<link>https://glendalarke.com/2006/10/why-i-wont-write-another-first-person/#comment-24466</link>

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		<pubDate>Mon, 09 Jul 2007 10:29:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I remember an Agatha Christi book in which the person telling the story was the murderer.  It isn&#039;t something that everyone can or should do, but she pulled it off nicely.  I have read many books with a first person POV and I don&#039;t see it as a problem.  The first person POV brings the reader much closer to the story because it is as if he is listening to someone who experienced it relate the story to him.  It is limiting because no one character can see everything or understand all of the events.  There is always a trade off.  Most blogs are written from a first person POV and people seem to read those fine, so I wouldn&#039;t worry about people who are afraid of reading fiction with a first person POV.  If anything, it shows a lack of intelligence on the part of these people and they may not read that much anyway.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I remember an Agatha Christi book in which the person telling the story was the murderer.  It isn&#8217;t something that everyone can or should do, but she pulled it off nicely.  I have read many books with a first person POV and I don&#8217;t see it as a problem.  The first person POV brings the reader much closer to the story because it is as if he is listening to someone who experienced it relate the story to him.  It is limiting because no one character can see everything or understand all of the events.  There is always a trade off.  Most blogs are written from a first person POV and people seem to read those fine, so I wouldn&#8217;t worry about people who are afraid of reading fiction with a first person POV.  If anything, it shows a lack of intelligence on the part of these people and they may not read that much anyway.</p>
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		By: ink paw prints		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[ink paw prints]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 02 Nov 2006 01:09:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[hmm.. interesting. What do your agent and publisher say about this?&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;admittedly I usually prefer reading 3rd to 1st person, but I&#039;d never let that get in the way of reading a book that interested me.&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;lol @ trudi&#039;s editor story. Tbh, this is why my protagonist is always male =/ don&#039;t want men to pick up a book and think &quot;girl main character? no way&quot;.&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;maybe you&#039;ll get really popular in third and people will go back to read your first person books because they&#039;re by the same author and think &quot;wow, I could get into this 1st person thing...&quot; ;)&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;bdw rob, if you get confused in dialogue it&#039;s because it&#039;s been badly written 99% of the time]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>hmm.. interesting. What do your agent and publisher say about this?</p>
<p>admittedly I usually prefer reading 3rd to 1st person, but I&#8217;d never let that get in the way of reading a book that interested me.</p>
<p>lol @ trudi&#8217;s editor story. Tbh, this is why my protagonist is always male =/ don&#8217;t want men to pick up a book and think &#8220;girl main character? no way&#8221;.</p>
<p>maybe you&#8217;ll get really popular in third and people will go back to read your first person books because they&#8217;re by the same author and think &#8220;wow, I could get into this 1st person thing&#8230;&#8221; 😉</p>
<p>bdw rob, if you get confused in dialogue it&#8217;s because it&#8217;s been badly written 99% of the time</p>
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		By: Anonymous		</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 02 Nov 2006 00:19:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I would never put a book back on the shelf based on the perspective used, but I must say I have some issues with Ist person narrative.  The reptition of &quot;I&quot; is very irritating.  It seems to distance the reader from the characters, and makes the story seem really flat somehow.  &lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;Then again, 1st person can be used very effectively (Robin Hobb used it very well I found, and Assassin&#039;s Apprentice is a favourite of mine), but that is the thing - it must be used well.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I would never put a book back on the shelf based on the perspective used, but I must say I have some issues with Ist person narrative.  The reptition of &#8220;I&#8221; is very irritating.  It seems to distance the reader from the characters, and makes the story seem really flat somehow.  </p>
<p>Then again, 1st person can be used very effectively (Robin Hobb used it very well I found, and Assassin&#8217;s Apprentice is a favourite of mine), but that is the thing &#8211; it must be used well.</p>
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		By: Glenda Larke		</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Nov 2006 15:48:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Thank you, Rob!&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;Trudi, I take your point of course. But as I said, the reaction on message boards and forums was just the catalyst for me to start asking around. And I found the same reaction outside of the cyber world. &lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;But as Hrugaar says, never say never...]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you, Rob!</p>
<p>Trudi, I take your point of course. But as I said, the reaction on message boards and forums was just the catalyst for me to start asking around. And I found the same reaction outside of the cyber world. </p>
<p>But as Hrugaar says, never say never&#8230;</p>
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		By: Anonymous		</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Nov 2006 15:33:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I find objections to 1st Person weird. What I do dislike is when it&#039;s used for a number of different characters and the character &quot;speaking&quot; swaps around quickly. Some writers even make it difficult to work out who is actually speaking, but of course this also happens with 3rd Person writing.&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;Regarding the latter, I hate our convention of having every line of a speech begin with quote marks. Especially when there is more than 2 people speaking, it can be very difficult to know who is who.&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;I&#039;ll take this opportunity to say how much I enjoyed &quot;Isles of Glory&quot; and look forward to reading more of your books.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I find objections to 1st Person weird. What I do dislike is when it&#8217;s used for a number of different characters and the character &#8220;speaking&#8221; swaps around quickly. Some writers even make it difficult to work out who is actually speaking, but of course this also happens with 3rd Person writing.</p>
<p>Regarding the latter, I hate our convention of having every line of a speech begin with quote marks. Especially when there is more than 2 people speaking, it can be very difficult to know who is who.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ll take this opportunity to say how much I enjoyed &#8220;Isles of Glory&#8221; and look forward to reading more of your books.</p>
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		By: chocolatetrudi		</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Nov 2006 14:45:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I&#039;d never make major writing decisions based on a discussions on a message board. If I did, I&#039;d write stand alone, third person books with no prologues or epilogues. &lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;Firstly, message boards aren&#039;t a large or typical sample of the general reading community. The sorts of people who read mbs are only a fraction of the reading public. Secondly, only people with strong views tend to respond to discussions like these, and people with strong views are often in the minority. &lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;People who are well read can be as varied in their opinions as those who aren&#039;t. I wouldn&#039;t take that as an indication of the tastes of the general population either.&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;And being well read doesn&#039;t mean someone is a good reader, either. I once laughed my way through a well-read magazine editor&#039;s article on first/third person in which he explained that he couldn&#039;t read a first person female character because he was male, and he couldn&#039;t put himself in the head of a female.&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;As far as I&#039;m concerned, that&#039;s the editor&#039;s problem. Most people wouldn&#039;t have any trouble at all.&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;Write to your strengths, and be wary of basing your decisions on too small a range of people.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;d never make major writing decisions based on a discussions on a message board. If I did, I&#8217;d write stand alone, third person books with no prologues or epilogues. </p>
<p>Firstly, message boards aren&#8217;t a large or typical sample of the general reading community. The sorts of people who read mbs are only a fraction of the reading public. Secondly, only people with strong views tend to respond to discussions like these, and people with strong views are often in the minority. </p>
<p>People who are well read can be as varied in their opinions as those who aren&#8217;t. I wouldn&#8217;t take that as an indication of the tastes of the general population either.</p>
<p>And being well read doesn&#8217;t mean someone is a good reader, either. I once laughed my way through a well-read magazine editor&#8217;s article on first/third person in which he explained that he couldn&#8217;t read a first person female character because he was male, and he couldn&#8217;t put himself in the head of a female.</p>
<p>As far as I&#8217;m concerned, that&#8217;s the editor&#8217;s problem. Most people wouldn&#8217;t have any trouble at all.</p>
<p>Write to your strengths, and be wary of basing your decisions on too small a range of people.</p>
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		By: Glenda Larke		</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 31 Oct 2006 16:52:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[No, no Cheryl - No publisher&#039;s involvment here. Just my own observation. The topic has come up a couple of times on several different sff genre forums and it has been quite, quite astonishing how many readers say they aren&#039;t interested in even trying first person narrative. And these are people who read widely. After that I started asking around. &lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;Just look at the answers on the previous post - Eyeris and Karen, both people who read widely in the genre, don&#039;t like it. Even Russell is dubious.&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;The cover thing is interesting. That topic has also come up a lot. The answer tends to be that a good cover can sell a book. A bad cover, though, is more neutral. People say that they are so inured to bad covers that they take more notice of  the blurb than the cover pix. The strange thing is that the publisher was so gung ho about those covers. You would think they - if anyone - would have an idea of what sells and, seeing they had no budget whatsoever for marketing the book, that they would take special care to   give it a cover that would sell it.&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;Anyway, if that was what they thought, they were wrong. I suspect it did sell Book 1 - to the wrong people, who were expecting something else entirely, and were therefore disappointed.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>No, no Cheryl &#8211; No publisher&#8217;s involvment here. Just my own observation. The topic has come up a couple of times on several different sff genre forums and it has been quite, quite astonishing how many readers say they aren&#8217;t interested in even trying first person narrative. And these are people who read widely. After that I started asking around. </p>
<p>Just look at the answers on the previous post &#8211; Eyeris and Karen, both people who read widely in the genre, don&#8217;t like it. Even Russell is dubious.</p>
<p>The cover thing is interesting. That topic has also come up a lot. The answer tends to be that a good cover can sell a book. A bad cover, though, is more neutral. People say that they are so inured to bad covers that they take more notice of  the blurb than the cover pix. The strange thing is that the publisher was so gung ho about those covers. You would think they &#8211; if anyone &#8211; would have an idea of what sells and, seeing they had no budget whatsoever for marketing the book, that they would take special care to   give it a cover that would sell it.</p>
<p>Anyway, if that was what they thought, they were wrong. I suspect it did sell Book 1 &#8211; to the wrong people, who were expecting something else entirely, and were therefore disappointed.</p>
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		By: hrugaar		</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 31 Oct 2006 16:48:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I think I agree with Russell&#039;s last point, in that some stories will just work better if told from first person rather than third person POV (and vice versa).  So never say never, Glenda, that&#039;s just tempting the gods. :oD&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;Then again, I don&#039;t have a commercial mind.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think I agree with Russell&#8217;s last point, in that some stories will just work better if told from first person rather than third person POV (and vice versa).  So never say never, Glenda, that&#8217;s just tempting the gods. :oD</p>
<p>Then again, I don&#8217;t have a commercial mind.</p>
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		By: Cheryl		</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 31 Oct 2006 16:07:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Numbers, Glenda. And sources. You may well be right, but I&#039;d like to know where you got your data from. And whether the number of people who won&#039;t read a first person narrative is greater or smaller than the number of people who won&#039;t even look inside a book if it has My Little Sea Pony on the cover.&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;Or to put it another way, if a publisher&#039;s PR people say &quot;you must change how you write or you won&#039;t sell&quot;, they may just be making it up.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Numbers, Glenda. And sources. You may well be right, but I&#8217;d like to know where you got your data from. And whether the number of people who won&#8217;t read a first person narrative is greater or smaller than the number of people who won&#8217;t even look inside a book if it has My Little Sea Pony on the cover.</p>
<p>Or to put it another way, if a publisher&#8217;s PR people say &#8220;you must change how you write or you won&#8217;t sell&#8221;, they may just be making it up.</p>
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